Years ago, my creative writing instructor gave a short lecture during a workshop about this concept. He may or may not have called it “Buttering the Bread” but that’s what I’ve called it for years. Consider this type of storytelling and consider the point in it where you lose interest.
Tom got hungry, so he went downstairs for breakfast. He normally ate toast, so he decided to open the breadbox, remove the Wonder bread, untwist the tie, and withdraw two flimsy slices. Customarily, he re-tied the bread and returned it to its resting spot within the fly-free confines of the box. Taking two steps east, he placed each slice in the toaster and pressed the lever with no more or no less authority than any other day. He watched as the wired inside his dorm-room toaster heated to a bursting orange and sizzling red state. Just when he could not wait any longer, the toast appeared innocently. Tom took the butter from the refrigerator. It was cold and hard to spread. He’d learned from his grandmother that he could heat his knife quickly by holding it under hot running water. It worked again, and he padded each slice with a unhealthy square of the stuff everyone calls butter but is actually margarine. Tom had a big day ahead since it was his first interview, and he wanted to make sure he did not leave the house hungry.
Tom made some toast as he always does and thought about his interview.
Granted, the first one is considerably longer, but is it good writing? Is it significant to the events of the story? Is the author adding anything worthwhile? Does it seem, perhaps, that he is just padding his word count total?
No. No. No. Yes.
Don’t butter the bread. Get to it and move forward.